Subject: Re: Pastiches
From: kbays@bluemoon.uucp (Ken Bays)
Date: 1991-08-11, 23:22
Newsgroups: alt.tv.twin-peaks

 
About your pastiche:
Very interesting.  You have the characters' dialogue down perfectly, 
especially Albert's and Coop's.

The only suggestion I would have is to maybe lose the line with Nadine 
telling Mike to look what he's been making love to.  It doesn't seem to 
fit in with what was really just a humorous subplot.

Ken

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